写作2

2-2

作业讲解

• are at the same level
• economic development has propelled¹ xxx --随着经济的发展

• nominalization 名词化
• access superior medical resouces = seek professional help = see a doctor
• escape the pressure from work
• insufficient public funding ----不足的公共资金
• traumatize 使受精神创伤

授课

• 思路:

  1. 开头段：背景+观点

     

  School education is the phase that mostly every child goes through, influencing one's future development to a great extent.

  

  2. 让步段: 说不支持的观点的好处

     

  3. 但是段: 支持观点的好处

     

4. 本方观点段: 再说一个论点,说支持观点的好
5. 结论段:

• 雅思常见三种跑题模式
  1. 不能忽略动作主体
  2. should 是应当性 不能用措施证明,can 写措施
  3. 不能忽略限定词(限定目的)

词汇

• public investment
• be of importance=important
• out of xxx ---出于xxx目的

Footnotes

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